Friday, October 26, 2007

Message in A Bottle

To the Past, Perfect, and Future

A few days ago, I met him, and as soon as I remember you...He makes me realize, how I miss you. Sorry about the promise to take care of myself, to control myself...but I think I've lost my control. Today, I just want to meet you again, to hug you, to kiss you, like yesterday when you're by my side. 
I heard from a friend, how happy you are now...waiting for the Star. But, until now, I can't forgive myself about what I've made to you...I can't tell, how much I passed Moon, just to find way to apologize for what I've done to you...And today, I just want the Moon tell you "I'm sorry".
I don't have any words to say, but please, accept all mine and give me all your's. Hope you can find the Message in A Bottle, anyway...anywhere...anytime...


Buat temen2 yg baca, plisss bgd, koreksi klo Inggris gw salah, soal na gw emang lemot di Inggris, vocabulary gw minim bgd, trus grammar gw jg lemah....hiks..hiks..hiks....gimana mo dapet suami bule ya? xixixixi.... Poko e, gw terima koreksi, sepedes apapun.....

PS. Ichal, kek na gw terinspirasi dr cerpen lo dhe, sori, bukan niat plagiat ye.... :p

46 comments:

Febry Nech said...

busettt jyll....tentang siapa neh? kuni cemburu deh :p

Febry Nech said...

kan suami lo orang jawa :p:p

Jyll Chan said...

bukan ttg sapa2 koq tan....xixixixi....
cuman lagi puyeng, sussah cari inspirasi.... *korban iklan* :p

Jyll Chan said...

dimana2 inggris butuh tan, jd ye...ngetes2 doank :p
jd gimana, koreksi dong....

budi bowo said...

eeeee gw kira itu lagi ngomongin gw.
~wkwkwwkwk
btw , keknya...
wait for the Star <> waiting for the star

KuroShiro TheDeviL said...

I hate tenses!! Ngapain jyll pake past, perfect, future ngingatkan aku pelajaran laknat ituh

Jyll Chan said...

kuro, i hate too.... *TOSS*
tp apa daya....xixixixi.....

jgn benci pelajaran kuro, ntar bodoh lho.... *sok nasehatin*

Jyll Chan said...

xixixixi....ada yg GR ya ?

btw, thanks koreksi na....taq edit dolo dhe....

KuroShiro TheDeviL said...

Yah gak benci2 bgt sie jyll, besok senen tes inggris hiks

Jyll Chan said...

ganbatte ne...
moga2 test na lancar2 aja....

*baca mantra spy kuro lolos test dapat nilai A+* :p

KuroShiro TheDeviL said...

Amin!! Kemaren cuma dapet A-

Jyll Chan said...

hhmmmm....nilai na sengaja di pamer ya kuro ?
utk buat gw cembokur ya krn ga prnh dapat A ?
*sepak kuro*

Febry Nech said...

anjrottttt *gampar-gampar kuro*

inggris gue buruk selalu nilainya wakakakakakak
tenses keparat

KuroShiro TheDeviL said...

Ember tenses laknat!!! Hee bukan maksut hatiku buwat dirimu cembokur feb *kedep2 tawa setan*

Jyll Chan said...

*ambil pecut sakti na enggek*
*becut2 kuro*

KuroShiro TheDeviL said...

Wadaw *kabur ke kolong rok na enggek*

Jyll Chan said...

waks....napa rok na enggek siy kuro ???

jyll : enggek, kluarin kuro dr situ
enggek : yes, mam

*becut2 kuro lagi*

fickle boon said...

ciyeeeeeeeeeeehhh jyllchaann..sapa tuuuuu...

inggrisnya bagus kok, kayaknya lo lebih baik belajar bahasa jepun daripada inggris...wekekeke

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

kenapa bhs inggris seh....ilpil...ilpil....ilpil....

wekekekkek

Jyll Chan said...

bukan sapa2 echan....wew.....

hooo, mo belajar jepun lage niy, abis waktu ntu cuman ampe level 1 doank...hiks hiks...

Jyll Chan said...

koq ilpil yuk ?
kaga ngartos emang na ?
xixixixixi.... :p

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

amit....amit....

kemrn uts writing..ngarang...ngarang tentang masalah lagu rasa sayange

gimana gak ilpil juga....
tapi itu gw milih sendiri seh....

Jyll Chan said...

wkwkwkwkwkwk
salah lo ndiri dong klo gtu.... :p

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

ember.....

wekkekek
makanya masil ilpil ama bhs inggris.....wekkekekeke

Moon Momo said...

ciyeeeeeeee..........

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

alah lo jyll mo ngalahin aguilera ya

jyll in the bottle......

icharu san said...

wawawa baru baca.. nani ko re? curhatan hati yang terdalam ya jyl? :P

Uchie chan said...

ditujukan kepada siapa nih?

~ Rina R ~ said...

ya ampyun jyll, nulis surat buat sapa nih mpok...:pp
well, gw juga gak jago inggris (apalagi masalah tenses), tp dari pengalaman baca bbrp tulisan in english sepertinya ada beberapa pilihan kata yg kaya'nya lebih enak diganti deh.

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A few days ago, I met him, and he reminds me of you...He makes me realize, how I miss you. Sorry about the promise to take care of myself, to control myself...but I think I've lost my control. Today I just want to meet you again, to hug you, to kiss you, like when you're still by my side.
I heard from a friend, how happy you are now...waiting for the Star. But, until now, I can't forgive myself about what I've done to you...I can't tell, how much I passed Moon, just to find way to apologize for what I've done to you...And today, I just want the Moon tell you "I'm sorry".
I don't have any words to say, but please, accept all mine and give me all yours. Hope you can find the Message in A Bottle, anyway...anywhere...anytime...

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kata2 yg gw ganti/koreksi gw bold. klo gak suka maap yah...^_^v
and gudlak buat pencarian suami bule-nya....(",)

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

oh...mo nyari bule toh

wkekekeke

nitip atu jyll

乃枝 ちゅう said...

*pinsan mendadak**sadar lagi* Jyll, mpe segitunya pake bahasa inggris, noe mpe puyeng nih ngebacanya
mana langsung inget kemaren ulangan tenses dapet jelek lagi, fyuh....jadi inget ma ulangan laknat itu
*cekek jyll gara2 ngingetin ulangan laknat**ditendang jyll**kabur balik ke multi noe sendiri**senyum2 najong ngejek jyll dari multi noe**dilempar Jyll pake kapak*

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

tuh kan jillllllllllll..........ada yg protes lagi...............wkkwkwkwkkw

Jyll Chan said...

yuk, boleh tuh Jyll in A Bottle
tp klo dah di dalam kaga bisa ngapa2in
so...tolongin ya yuk
paketin ke jepun
ke alamat rumah na shun
jgn ampe salah loh.... :p

Jyll Chan said...

napa chil ? *pupugo*

Jyll Chan said...

hiks hiks hiks...

ho oh chal...

hiks hiks hiks...

Jyll Chan said...

oce dhe, gw ngaku aja...
past, perfect, dan future sbnr na mewakilin 3 org yg punya arti dalam bgd dlm hidup gw...hiks...
nah, dua di antaranya itu tamaki dan oguri...
tp pikir sendiri yoo posisi mrk dimana, past, perfect ato future....wakakakakak.... :p

Jyll Chan said...

@ Reena :
Rin, thanks bgd utk koreksinya
udah gw ganti bbrp....yg belom gw ganti ada alasan na siy, tolong di-kroscek ulang dhe... ^ ^
*lama2 gw dijitak krn nyusain mulu :p*

Jyll : A few days ago, I meet him, and as soon as I remember you...
Reena : A few days ago, I met him, and he reminds me of you...
=> gw milih kata2 ‘as soon as’ krn emang maksud na hanya pada saat itu aja (a few days ago), selain waktu itu ngga…

Jyll : And today, I just want to meet you again, to hug you, to kiss you, like yesterday when you're by my side.
Reena : Today I just want to meet you again, to hug you, to kiss you, like when you're still by my side.
=> maksud gw disini, besok2 masih ada kesempatan bertemu, hanya pada saat ini aja (today) yg ngga bisa…sdgkan klo punya Rina, gw nangkep maksud na seakan2 tidak ada kesempatan bertemu lagi…

Jyll : But, until now, I can't forgive myself about what I've made to you...I can't tell, how much I passed Moon, just to find way apologized for what I've done to you...
Reena : But, until now, I can't forgive myself about what I've done to you...I can't tell, how much I passed Moon, just to find way to apologize for what I've done to you...
=> klo yg ini siy krn gw pikir ga mao ngulang kata ‘done’ sampe 2 kali, jadi na pake kata ‘made’ di awal…xixixi… :p

Jyll Chan said...

pan lo udah ada Miller.... :p

Jyll Chan said...

syuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttt *lempar noe pake kapak*

Aoi : Jyll, napa lempar istri gw pake kapak siy ?
Jyll : istri lo bawel sih....
Aoi : ho-oh siy, istri gw emang bawel
Jyll : maka na cere aja, cari yg laen.... *kedip kedip*
Aoi : klo Jyll mo nerima Aoi, Aoi bersedia nyerein noe.... *ketawa mesum*

xixixixi....
bai bai noe.... :p

Jyll Chan said...

*kaga dengar....kaga liat....*

angin kali ini jaat bener...
koq dr tadi niup2 kuping gw...
hiiieee...mrinding jadi na...

:p

yuka_uhuy yummy said...

gila......ternyata gw juga bisa jadi angin ye..............

wkakk

Jyll Chan said...

yuk, tenyata bukan angin...tp antu jail.......

wkwkwkwkwk

Haru deSu said...

cieeeeee....
saha atuh neh orang??

Jyll Chan said...

pipers...baru nongol lage neh...
dooh, moso ngga tau pip....
xixixixi.... :p

Haru deSu said...

sapa seh??tamaki atow oguri??

Jyll Chan said...

crita ttg 3 org koq pip... ^ ^